not really funny but good arts maybe?
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pathesisx [OP](09/12/2015) [+] (6 replies)
smaller pic maybe ( ************************************************* )
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thunderpony (09/12/2015) [-] Took me a few seconds to realize what it was, but when I did.
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anon (09/12/2015) [-] Art is as great as always but that whole anatomy thing might cost you points, I'm very sure legs don't bend that way..
Maybe edit it to look like she's leaning on a table and change her leg to overlap (like the yellow line in my example)
For her eyes, consider removing the war paint or at least reduce it, it draws a lot of attention away from the rest of the drawing and lower her pupils so shes looking forward rather than somewhere in the air unless you're implying she has a vibrating buttplug in which case disregard this advice
For the gun, use more straight lines maybe? It really doesn't look right and I can't figure out why.
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Maybe edit it to look like she's leaning on a table and change her leg to overlap (like the yellow line in my example)
For her eyes, consider removing the war paint or at least reduce it, it draws a lot of attention away from the rest of the drawing and lower her pupils so shes looking forward rather than somewhere in the air unless you're implying she has a vibrating buttplug in which case disregard this advice
For the gun, use more straight lines maybe? It really doesn't look right and I can't figure out why.
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midothegreat (09/13/2015) [-] It's Stefanie Joosten, she did the voice and motion/facial capture for Quiet
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anon (09/12/2015) [-] Some quick observations from me, there's some things that don't sit right because of the angle. I would encourage you to look for a pic or have someone pose for you, because when dealing with foreshortening (like in the legs, torso and arms) plenty can go wrong.
For starters the arm is too short, from the angle of her shoulder it should look longer and going forward, not backwards. The other arm could be a tad lower.
Make sure to sketch a medial line that splits the torso in the middle, to pinpoint the pectoralis, abdominal muscles, and bellybutton, all in one curve, you'll find that the hips aren't all that frontal.
The legs look weird because the right thigh's knee is too to the left, if you want to have the right leg behind the left leg, then the thigh should face front a bit more. The left leg can be a longer still.
Like I said, these poses are easier to draw when using a reference, if you make them up, a lot can be drawn wrong specially if its a pose you haven't practiced too much before.
For starters the arm is too short, from the angle of her shoulder it should look longer and going forward, not backwards. The other arm could be a tad lower.
Make sure to sketch a medial line that splits the torso in the middle, to pinpoint the pectoralis, abdominal muscles, and bellybutton, all in one curve, you'll find that the hips aren't all that frontal.
The legs look weird because the right thigh's knee is too to the left, if you want to have the right leg behind the left leg, then the thigh should face front a bit more. The left leg can be a longer still.
Like I said, these poses are easier to draw when using a reference, if you make them up, a lot can be drawn wrong specially if its a pose you haven't practiced too much before.
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piratedangel (09/12/2015) [-] Good job.
Glad that the FJ community is finally giving a damn on someone's hard work. Pic related: I posted my artwork a while back. It didn't receive much attention like this. I guess I suck at art. /Adapting+a+child+s+idea/text/5680323/[/spoiler] [spoiler] Or maybe I should've just drawn boobs
![Good job.
Glad that the FJ community is finally giving a damn on someone's hard work. Pic related: I posted my artwork a while back. It didn't receive much attention like this. I guess I suck at art. /Adapting+a+child+s+idea/text/5680323/[/spoiler] [spoiler] Or maybe I should've just drawn boobs](http://2static4.fjcdn.com/comments/Good+job+glad+that+the+_c63438b0d679a7e66ac7275c2e6c84fd.jpg)
Glad that the FJ community is finally giving a damn on someone's hard work. Pic related: I posted my artwork a while back. It didn't receive much attention like this. I guess I suck at art. /Adapting+a+child+s+idea/text/5680323/[/spoiler] [spoiler] Or maybe I should've just drawn boobs
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kinginthenorth (09/12/2015) [-] The depth is ***** , to me. Mostly because the angle/stance of the characters doesn't entirely fit the background.
Dagger angle seems to change where the blade starts and where the handle and the hilt connect.
Woman's nose is off, if she's meant to be looking at the viewer.
8/10 better than what i can draw.
Dagger angle seems to change where the blade starts and where the handle and the hilt connect.
Woman's nose is off, if she's meant to be looking at the viewer.
8/10 better than what i can draw.
