Visually it isn't very chaotic. everything is tidily sectioned of and the ranging thickness of lines seems uniform, with flowing curvature while nothing seems disorganized or messy, just abstract.

sound-wise it's unpleasant, which is not alike the art at all. Similarly there's no trace of colour, but the dark grating mess doesn't coincide with the steadily stroked parables of intertwining parabolas

>what i'm working on
>do it for me

Yeah not really at all actually. I'm making literally every single aspect. Have you ever participated in any art form? I'm asking you guys to give feedback, because criticism is the best way for me to gather data about what I'm making so that I can make the piece more and more specific to get that point across.

I'm not asking you to make prints, or to make any soundscapes, or even go into depth about it. I'm just asking for feedback so that I can understand how people react to it.

To me its like you were asking what you should modeling your idea after, when you should be expressing your own ideas.

What is his idea is to capture visuals in sound? Art is more than an egoist monument to yourself and your feelings, it's also about exploration and communication.

an egoist monument of the piece itself, not its creator OR it's appreciators

Sorry?

eh i dunno

That is somewhat the point, but I'll also keep that in mind