I mean, it's funny in that the hero of time gets rekt by chickens, but it lacks comedic timing. It takes 5 minutes for that to happen, and I think it would serve much better as a short skit rather than a video.
Your voice acting is soft. By that I mean it's alright, but take your liberty to find a moment where nobody is home and SHOUT "Nooooo" instead of whispering it.
Make your videos a bit more faster paced or make stories in a 10-20 second format and stick em together and you'll probably get far.
voice acting is a bit...meh but eh i have seen worse **** and the concept is pretty good.
small tip, make sure everybody who has lines are all of the same quality or loudness, if you
have 1 person who is louder and more distorted than anyone else it is distracting but other
than that it is ok.