Hotel horror 1: the Sludgebomb. This is my first attempt to make an OC-story. Sorry for the spelling errors and crappy grammar, writing entire stories in a diff Hotel horror 1: the Sludgebomb This is my first attempt to make an OC-story Sorry for spelling errors and crappy grammar writing entire stories in a diff
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Hotel horror 1: the Sludgebomb. This is my first attempt to make an OC-story. Sorry for the spelling errors and crappy grammar, writing entire stories in a diff

This is my first attempt to make an OC-story.
Sorry for the spelling errors and crappy grammar, writing entire stories in a different language is a lot harder then a small reaction. And sorry for the crappy editing, my MS-paint skillz stagnate at the bottom part of the chart. Feel free to give me a few pointers on how to work with paint.

Hotel Horror Part L The
THUR ? expect a win for me at the end of every story, it' s not always gonna happen. But somehow I won a few though.
Side note: Moat waitresses there are alpha bitches that will rip you a new one ifyou talk back at them, they don' t take shit from nobody and will all
make sure the world revolves around them.
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> hey anon, wanna give your opinion?
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#2 - skullball
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NIce post! but change the colors next time it was hard to read
User avatar #4 to #2 - lotengo [OP]
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Yea you are probably right.
What kind of color do you prefer for my next story ?
User avatar #5 to #4 - skullball
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The black background was okay but i would like a lighter text color because the dark blue text almost blended with the background
User avatar #7 to #5 - lotengo [OP]
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User avatar #8 to #7 - skullball
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That looks awesome! much better
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User avatar #3 to #1 - lotengo [OP]
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thanks, yea i see that now.
Oddly enough it looked good when i was making it in MS-paint. Wont make that mistake again but for this time u just gotta click to enlarg
User avatar #9 - jacksipian
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(03/09/2014) [-]
good story lotengo, but you should have made her stand over the drain just before the sludgebomb came up.
User avatar #10 to #9 - lotengo [OP]
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Thanks bro, but i had no idea it was going to spew like a fountain. A good part of it got on the steel workbench.
The acid was stil active at that moment, you can still see where the workbench got splashed. There is not a big hole or something like that but you can see the discoloring
User avatar #11 to #10 - jacksipian
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what about the second drain that you dug the forks and stuff out of when she walked by? should have dumped some down that one and called her over.
User avatar #12 to #11 - lotengo [OP]
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the fountain effect came from the acid mixing with the water. And Smokey would not let me touch that stuff.

User avatar #14 to #12 - jacksipian
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damn it smokey, stop trying to be safe and just cut loose for once!
User avatar #6 - lnyanchl
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(03/09/2014) [-]
Nice post, but we could of had it on, rolling in the deep.