Hotel horror 1: the Sludgebomb

#2 - skullball

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(03/09/2014)[-]

NIce post! but change the colors next time it was hard to read

#4 to #2 - lotengo#98 on commentsRank#98 [OP]

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(03/09/2014)[-]

Yea you are probably right.
What kind of color do you prefer for my next story ?

#5 to #4 - skullball

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(03/09/2014)[-]

The black background was okay but i would like a lighter text color because the dark blue text almost blended with the background

#7 to #5 - lotengo#98 on commentsRank#98 [OP]

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(03/09/2014)[-]

is this better
www.funnyjunk.com/Hotel+horror+2+mr.Lopez/funny-pictures/5048604/
rahtoga

#8 to #7 - skullball

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(03/09/2014)[-]

That looks awesome! much better

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#3 to #1 - lotengo#98 on commentsRank#98 [OP]

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(03/09/2014)[-]

thanks, yea i see that now.
Oddly enough it looked good when i was making it in MS-paint. Wont make that mistake again but for this time u just gotta click to enlarg

#9 - jacksipian#450 on commentsRank#450

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(03/09/2014)[-]

good story lotengo, but you should have made her stand over the drain just before the sludgebomb came up.

#10 to #9 - lotengo#98 on commentsRank#98 [OP]

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(03/09/2014)[-]

Thanks bro, but i had no idea it was going to spew like a fountain. A good part of it got on the steel workbench.
The acid was stil active at that moment, you can still see where the workbench got splashed. There is not a big hole or something like that but you can see the discoloring

#11 to #10 - jacksipian#450 on commentsRank#450

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(03/09/2014)[-]

what about the second drain that you dug the forks and stuff out of when she walked by? should have dumped some down that one and called her over.

#12 to #11 - lotengo#98 on commentsRank#98 [OP]

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(03/09/2014)[-]

the fountain effect came from the acid mixing with the water. And Smokey would not let me touch that stuff.

#14 to #12 - jacksipian#450 on commentsRank#450

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(03/09/2014)[-]

damn it smokey, stop trying to be safe and just cut loose for once!