Welcome to hell. As a regular thing with new artists, they'll make a comic about making a comic on FJ, once you passed that phase you can now start focusing on actually drawing comics and letting your mind run wild. Tip try to focus on comics that arn't about FJ so you build your artistic powers
You guys are thumbing this simply because it's an OC comic, no other reason.
It's like that time when the front page was flooded with "Hey, guys! I'm gonna make OC now!" comics.
My boy you will go far! Away... Run... save yourself! It is too late for us but there is still time for you! RUN! RUN AWAY! RUN BEFORE YOU BECOME PART OF THE THUMBS! Part of the thumbs... Part of the site... Part of the thumbs... Part of the site...
I like the style, feels recognizable.
I'd recommend making jokes that don't relate to FJ as a punchline.
Comics can be viewed as a way to interest new viewers, so making the joke easier to understand can be beneficial.
It's good though.