constructive Criticism 2
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wildbhere (01/07/2016) [-] try to talk louder, articulate yourself a lil bit more (not saying to over articulate) and just try to be a bit more lively, little bit edgy and a pinch of character.
i ain't the best to give criticisms but i watch a bunch of people on-line and you see this pattern a lot
i ain't the best to give criticisms but i watch a bunch of people on-line and you see this pattern a lot
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pimlicoboy [OP](01/07/2016) [-]
thanks for the feedback, There have been a bit of problems with the Mic but there sorted gonna do a third part so I will so how it progresses.
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pimlicoboy [OP](01/08/2016) [-]
Thanks man will probably post it on here anyway like a cunt.
